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Title: Fenmine II
Age: ~13

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* due to the nature of this universe "she" and "her" refers to both twins at the same time unless otherwise stated

- in recent times infected monsters seem to be becoming more common
- tbh not many people think the apocalyptic creature will rise again so even a lot of the legend's believers don't think it's anything to do with it, even though it's technically due for another cycle
- Fenmine is a mischievous squirt with a poisonous tongue who lives in a fairly quiet town, I haven't come up with her real name yet
- she's a direct descendant of the original Fenmine (she only half-believes it)
- her conversion ritual leads to her twin becoming a fenmine, a form that wasn't passed down from either of her parents (and has not shown up since the original Fenmine, who didn't pass down his form; as a bonus she resembles the original Fenmine's form in drawings)
- this is seen as a potential bad omen, and instead of being apprenticed to the local pair of elder twins she's sent packing to head to a bigger city, both to learn from a better master and to understand what this means (bad news for her since she's always expected to live a peaceful life in her peaceful little town)
- her great-great-great-(idk how many times)-grandfather's coat is dug up from some storage before she leaves, there's no real plot point to this yet, I just want the gigantic coat on her
- eventually she figures she needs to have a word with the apocalyptic creature and prepares to fight, I guess
- I haven't thought about much past this point. I suppose she gathers nakamas and heads towards the source of everything...I'm thinking Roc, Orthus and Chimera at the moment
- thought: her twin gets killed, she gets infected, then trades some of her lifespan to temporarily revive her twin, the defeating happens (the creature goes back to sleep) and she lives on with her shortened lifespan as a singleton back in her peaceful little town (or not, if the town got destroyed...which might be too heavy. idk.)

- she's kind of eh about shouldering all this but at least there's some kind of an adventure here (or at least, that's what she thinks at the beginning)
- her small town treated her well, honestly didn't want to send her off (despite her various mischiefs)
- the world outside isn't as nice to her, especially because of her creature form - they're not outright mean because she's supposed to be their saviour, but she's clueless and her existence means something bad's going to happen
- I don't know what her conclusion/her motivation to save the world is yet...I feel like it'd be kind of silly to limit it to a desire to protect only the people that mean something to her, but then there's currently no reason for her to be charitable enough to want to save even the people that were unkind to her
I don't like the idea of someone saving the world to protect only a select few people while the rest are just lucky that this benevolent saviour exists and should be really thankful to them...scratches head...
I guess she can grow during her travels...come close to giving up, but decide that there are more important things to protect, things that are important to the people who are important to her...or something like that
- her element isn't focused, in her quest to learn she meets different masters of different elements and tries different things, so she's not skewed towards any particular element
I think she might try to come up with something new though...

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